南昌市即将举办全球财经论坛。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求:
(1)乐意为国际友人服务;
(2)掌握丰富的文化知识,既能服务于外国朋友,又能传递中国文化;
(3)具有流利的英语表达能力,能做好沟通工作。
假如你叫李华,是江西师范大学英语专业的一名学生,请根据以上要求,用英语写一封想做博览会志愿者的申请。
要求:字迹工整,120词左右。开头已写好,不计入总词数。
生词:全球财经论坛 the Fortune Global Forum
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.
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Yours, Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. with the coming of the Fortune Global Forum, I’d like very much to be a volunteer as a citizen of Nan Chang.
All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all , I promise I should be devoted to serving our foreign guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will not only serve but also be a carrier for our wonderful culture. What’s more, English as an international language will play an important role in communication during the forum, and I major in English and am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.
题目分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,而且很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组:Above all 首要的是, be devoted to doing致力于,not only … but also…,不但…而且…,play an important role in在…方面起着重要的作用,major in主修,To sum up总之, 句式上的亮点:I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one. 这句话用了定语从句。
还有范文还使用了Besides, What’s more,这样的关联词使文章更加顺畅。