某英语报社开展就中学生可不可以带手机上学的话题讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据下表所提供的信息，向该报编辑写一封英文信，发表观点。
书面表达（满分25分） Dear Editor, I’m a senior two student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________ |
Dear Editor:
I’m a senior three student. I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. I think they can do that. Because students can stay in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.
However, there are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.
In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。某英语报社开展就中学生可不可以带手机上学的话题讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据下表所提供的信息，向该报编辑写一封英文信，发表观点。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones.这里含有一个宾语从句；Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages. 这里含有一个表语从句。