问题 写作题
最近我校对高一学生入学一学期后的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查结果,并提出个人观点。
60%左右的学生认为
40%左右的学生认为
我的观点
1. 高中学习很有压力;
2. 科目难度大,课后作业多;
3. 没时间参加锻炼等活动
1. 适应并喜欢高中生活;
2. 课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅。
……
要求:    1. 词数120;    2. 文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:course 课程
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has
become used to the life in senior high school. ­­                                
                                                                               
                                                                               
答案

One possible version:

Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has become used to the life in senior high school. As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows: Firstly the subjects they are learning now are obviously more different. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.

On the contrary, others say they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.

As far as I’m concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything effectively. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better. 

题目分析:写好图表式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,写作首要分析用什么时态。本文要求写一个高一学生的学习生活适应情况调查,通常用一般现在时。有2个观点,用they做主语,和自己的看法用I做主语。注意用一些高级词汇和短语和以及较复杂的句式。开头的变化和句子的连贯性也很重要。最后还要注意字数的控制。

【亮点说明】本文分三段写出了高一学生的学习生活适应情况调查。第一段先概况用了whether引导的同位语从句说明survey的内容,结果As can be seen,是opinions are divided。多数学生认为压力大,文中用了Firstly, Besides列出2条原因。which引导的非限制性定语从句是亮点。接下来,用On the contrary,开头,提出另一个观点。become used to the new life and enjoy it。又用了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句。最后,As far as I’m concerned,提出个人观点。最后的Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.倒装句使用也很恰当有力。

考点::图表类作文。

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