假设你是李夏I你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加商考的情况,请根据以下要点回信告知。
1. 考试日期与科目;
2. 考试准备情况;
3. 考试吋的状态;
4. 对试题的感受;
5. 可能的考试结果。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好;
3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:college entrance examination
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern. ________________________
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One possible version :
Dear Sam ,
Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about our college entrance examination .
The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province .Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period .With the exam approaching , most students will feel nervous and upset .But by now when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too difficult . I am sure I will get a good result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effort ,and I won’t regret .
Best wishes !
Yours ,
Li Xia
题目分析:本篇书面表达要求写一封书信,告诉朋友关于高考的一些情况,属于应用文范畴。书信是同学们非常熟悉的一种写作体裁,而且内容也是同学们正在体验着的高考,并且开头和结尾又已经给出,所以同学们写起来应该是游刃有余。在写作时应注意的问题有以下几个方面:首先,因为内容是同学们正在经历着的关于高考的事情,所以要使用一般现在时或者现在进行时。其次,要尽量使用高级词汇和句型来提高作文档次。此外,写作时也要使用恰当的连接词以使行文连贯,层次清晰。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,语言流畅,时态、人称和标点符号的使用正确,很好的完成了写作任务。在作文中作者开门见山提出自己写信的目的,即告诉Sam有关高考的事情,这种结构安排符合书信类文体的结构安排。在句式方面作者使用了定语从句which is considered a vital period,状语从句whatever the result is, 宾语从句what you asked about our college entrance examination等,而且还用到了Generally speaking , With the exam approaching , After all ,等短语,这些短语和句式的使用有效地增加了文章的亮点,提高了作文档次。