Top Meal of the Day

A recent study shows that nearly 50% of the school kids in Beijing do not have breakfast. They tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.

Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them. In addition, a few school girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast.

In fact, the morning meal plays an important part. it can provide 30% of the whole day’s energy. For a creative mind and better judgement, school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast.

题目分析：这是一篇话题类作文，所以首先要明确所要讨论的话题，最近的一项研究表明，北京大约50%的青少年有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据表格的内容用英语写一篇题为“Top Meal of the Day，并且需要用第三人称来写。需要写的内容已经以表格的形式给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，适当发挥使文章看起来更充实，并且一定要写出自己的观点。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合作文的主题与开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数120-150词，不要太多也不要太少。

点评：本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。