问题 写作题

写作(共50分)

小题1:请在上文第⑧段:“我支支吾吾,         ”横线上填写一个心理活动的片断描写。(10分)

要求:(1)符合上下文情境        (2)运用比喻的修辞手法

(3)字数不超过150字

小题2:请从下面两个题目中任选一个,写一篇文章。(40分)

题目(一)

书签是夹在书里用来标记阅读的,它让阅读更加方便。书签取材广泛,哪怕是用过的一张车票,喜欢的一片树叶……皆可成为书签。书签大都画面随意,文字简洁,富有哲理,体现着设计者的匠心。

一枚小小的书签往往承载着动人的故事,寄托着别样的情愫。书签还具有一定的隐喻意义,引发着我们无数的联想……

请以“一枚书签”为题,写一篇不少于600字的文章。

要求:①除诗歌、戏剧外,文体不限;②文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

题目(二)

以“那段            的日子”为题,写一篇不少于600字的文章。

要求:

(1)请你从“温暖”“自由”“孤单”“烦心”四个词语中选择一个,把题目补充完整。

(2)文中不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名等。

(3) 除诗歌、戏剧外,文体不限;

答案

小题1:我支支吾吾,想说老师你想歪了,话却含糊不清,仿佛有千言万语,却难以启齿。我摇头,心说,看来确实有代沟啊,这代沟就像我说我长大了,你却说你老了!

小题2:参考例文

那段自由的日子

自由是每个人所向往的。

一只鸟,被主人无情地关在笼子里,供他(她)玩赏。它失去了自由,失去了属于它的天空。然而一次次的头破血流并不能换来主人的怜悯。它没有放弃,时刻准备着飞出笼子,实现在天空自由飞翔的梦想。

我,被语数英物化政史无情地关在笼子里。外面的枷锁似乎是生命之重。然而,这一切我必须去承受,无论我往哪个方向逃,都是绝路。笼子外,贝多芬的《自由交响乐》让我向往,而我却不能出去。

有一天,主人喂完食忘记了关住笼子,它像一支离弦的箭飞出了笼子。那一刻,它的灵魂做了一次深呼吸,面对属于它的天空,它尽情地用白云擦拭它那缺少光泽的内心。它自由了,它的灵魂在那一刻得到了重生,它可以去追求自己的梦想了。

我疲惫地躺在书山题海中,无力地张开眼帘想看到希望。突然,妈妈打开“笼子”对我说:“累了吧,累了就休息休息。”听到这,我像离弦的箭一样飞出“笼子”。我看到外面的世界是如此的精彩,面对灿烂的阳光,我欣喜若狂。这一切来得太突然,我努力追寻着属于自己的梦想。

它无忧无虑地在天空中自由飞翔,它的梦想已完成,它有着缺陷的生命已完整。接下来,它应该做些什么呢?想着想着,一张巨大的网已把它网住,它知道发生了什么,它所有的挣扎都是徒劳,它终于放弃了。它的夙愿已完成。那段自由的日子带给它一束天堂里的圣光,它无憾。

我在跳跃的琴弦上触摸蓬勃的梦想,突然琴的电源被拔掉。“可以学习了”,一句冰冷的话让我知道了什么是现实。我放下梦想,但我无悔。因为只要我用倔强的双手握紧梦想不放,下一站一定会到达我要的天堂。那段自由的日子成为我内心的慰藉和动力,为了梦想,我必须全力以赴。

一瓣雪花在深处无声地燃烧,一只鸟在笼子里仰望,一个人静静地徜徉于那段自由的日子……

小题1:

题目分析:写好心理活动还应注意以下三点:1.要语言精练。心理活动是在写人叙事过程中有感而发,它的作用在于表现人物的思想品质,突出中心,其中写人叙事是主要的,心理活动的描写只起到画龙点睛的作用。2.要表现人物性格。一个人面对着眼前的事情,有何想法,持什么态度,是能够表现出人物性格的。因此,写人物的心理活动时,把握人物性格特点,杜绝小人说大人话,杜绝不符合人物性格特点的心理活动。3.要和其他描写相结合。在写心理活动时,可以穿插叙事,写出人物的动作和语言;又可内心独白,用“我想”引出心理描写;也可描写景物衬托心理活动。这样写使文章错落有致,富于变化。

小题2:

题目分析:这是一个有选择的半命题作文,从内容上看,这道半命题作文没有提供任何提示语,要求补题的词语是命题者提供的“温暖”“自由”“孤单”“烦心”四个词语,要求考生把题目补充完整。题目所给出的词语“日子”,简洁易懂,审题的难度不大,但如果脱离自身生活选材,难免内容空洞,缺乏真情实感。题目的核心词“日子”,决定了选材的内容要注重日常学习成长生活中的细节。要有自己的情感体验,要写出自己的所见所闻所感所思。行文中“自我”的缺失,文题的大而空,是导致文章内容失真、虚假的重要原因,宜从小处入手,从自身角度去思考写作内容。

问答题

Where one stage of child development has been left out, or not sufficiently experienced, the child may have to go back and capture the experience of it. A good home makes this possible, for example by providing the opportunity for the child to play with a clockwork car or toy railway train up to any age if he still needs to do so. (46)This principle, in fact, underlies all psychological treatment of children in difficulties with their development, and is the basis of work in child clinics.
The beginnings of discipline are in the nursery. Even the youngest baby is taught by gradual stages to wait for food, to sleep and wake at regular intervals and so on. If the child feels the world around him is a warm and friendly one, he slowly accepts its rhythm and accustoms himself to conforming to its demands. (47)Learning to wait for things, particularly for food, is a very important element in upbringing, and is achieved successfully only if too great demands are not made before the child can understand them.
Every parent watches eagerly the child’s acquisition of each new skill — the first spoken words, the first independent steps, or the beginning of reading and writing. (48)It is often tempting to hurry the child beyond his natural learning rate, but this can set up dangerous feeling of failure and states of anxiety in the child. This might happen at any stage. A baby might be forced to use a toilet too early; a young child might be encouraged to learn to read before he knows the meaning of the words he reads. (49)On the other hand, though, if a child is left alone too much, or without any learning opportunities, he loses his natural zest for life and his desire to find out new things for himself.
Learning together is a fruit source of relationship between children and parents. By playing together, parents learn more about their children and children learn more from their parents. Toys and games which both parents and children can share are an important means of achieving this co-operation. Building-block toys, jigsaw puzzles and crossword are good examples.
Parents vary greatly in their degree of strictness or indulgence towards their children. Some may be especially strict in money matters; others are severe over times of coming home at night, punctuality for meals or personal cleanliness. (50)In general, the controls imposed represent the needs of the parents and the values of the community as much as the child’s own happiness and well-being.

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