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This autumn my class went to Dalian to go the camping. We arrived at a sandy beach
with a well view of the sea. We set up our tents on the sandy beach, when night fell we
made a fire to give us light and kept us warm. All the classmates sat around them, talking
and laughing. Several hours late, Li Mei and I went back to the tent to have a chat. We
stayed up all of night. We found that we two had a lot of common. For instance, we both
like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics. The fire and the stars see our
happiness. What I wished time would stop at that moment!
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This autumn my class went to Dalian to go the camping. We arrived at a sandy beach
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with a well view of the sea. We set up our tents on the sandy beach, and when night
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fell we made a fire to give us light and kept us warm. All the classmates sat around
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them , talking and laughing. Several hours late, Li Mei and I went back to the tent to
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have a chat. We stayed up all ofnight. We found that we two had a lot of common. For
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instance, we both like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics. The fire and
the stars see our happiness. What I wished time would stop at that moment!
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