短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你

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短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it.

One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the

money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half

myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him

the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was

when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

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答案

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw

1. friends 2. one

a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father∧the money. But he said he could

3. which 4. for

only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the

5. I 6. 去掉the

school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You

7. when 8. later 9. gave

can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

10. 去掉much