短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行

问题改错题

    短文改错
    此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断:
    如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则改正.

Dear Mr David Harris,
    I'm very happy to write to you because I accepted the admission notice                               1. _____
in Beijing University yesterday. I'll study IT,                                                                            2.        _
that I have been dreaming about.                                                                                            3.         _
    Mr Harris, I still remember on the first day when you taught us three years ago.                   4.        _
We were quite shy and poorly at listening and                                                                         5.        _
speaking. You encourage us to practise as much as possible. Your teaching was so                 6.         _
interesting that all of us attracted.                                                                                            7.         _
With your helps I improved my English, and in NMF,T I got                                                   8.
the satisfactory result. Mr Harris, thank you very much indeed. How are you now                   9.
in Chicago? Hope to hear you soon.                                                                                       10.        _
                                                                                             Yours．
                                                                                                Li Wei

答案

1. accepted→received 2. in-of 3. that-which 4. 去掉on 5. poorly→poor

6. encourage→encouraged 7. attracted前加were 8. helps→help 9. the→a 10. hear后加from