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November 7，2011

Dear Mr．/Ms．，

I am writing to suggest some ways to improve our school security．

In view of the recent reports about several slips on rainy nights，I advise that all the broken road lights be repaired as soon as possible．Concerning the same accidents，some roads on our campus，the surfaces of which are already bumpy enough，urgently need fixing．

As winter is coming，students may use some high power— consumption electric apparatuses in their dormitories，which may give rise to serious hidden danger．In my opinion，the Office of Safety Management has the responsibility to remind the students of dorm safety as a necessary precaution．

I would appreciate it very much if you would consider my suggestions．

Best regards，

Li Ming

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写作指南

题目要求考生向学校的安全管理办公室写一封建议信——如何提高校园安全。建议信的写法大致为：首先，说明写信的目的；其次，在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法；最后，表达希望自己的建议能够被采纳。

以单句开头，I am writing to suggest简要交代该信件的目的——为提高校园安全献计献策。

In view of陈述了两起校园现有的不安全现象，并提出相关针对性建议。

接下来，作者提醒有关部门除了维修路灯和对破损路面进行必要的修补之外，还需加强预防措施(precaution)。

最后作者提出期盼，希望对方能采纳自己的建议。