问题 口语交际,情景问答题

从表达的角度来看,下面的语段在连贯与得体方面各存在一处问题,请找出来并加以改正。

①我社出版的《生命流程》(陈锋著,全书25万字,散文随笔集)②是一本与知己倾谈的书。③一册在手,④灵魂的香味便扑面而来。⑤装帧精美,⑥大方的设计,⑦新颖的编排,⑧显示了制作的用心。⑨有缘者必须购书一读。

(1)        处(填写序号)的               改为                      

(2)        处(填写序号)的                      改为         

答案

第⑤处改为“精美的装帧”。第⑨处里的“必须”一词太过生硬,可改为“不妨”“望能”。

本题将简明、连贯、得体与修改结合在一起考查,体现试题命制的综合性。根据前后句式的一致性,第⑤处“装帧精美”为主谓结构,而后面的⑥⑦句为偏正结构,根据文意,统一调整为偏正结构。此段文字是出版社向公众推销一书,语言应委婉得体,其中“必须”一次过于生硬。

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Most of the idle rich suffer unspeakable boredora as the price of their freedom from drudgery. At times they may find relief by hunting big game in Africa, but the number of such sensations is limited, especially after youth is past. 46. Accordingly more intelligent rich men work nearly as hard as if they were poor, while rich women mostly keep themselves busy with innumerable trifles of whose earth- shaking importance they are firmly persuaded.

47. Work is desirable as a preventive of boredom, for the boredom a man feels when doing necessary though uninteresting work is as nothing in comparison with the boredom he feels when having nothing to do. With this advantage of work another is associated, namely that it makes holidays much more delicious when they come. 48. Provided a man does not have to work so hard as to impair his vigor, he is likely to find far more zest in free time than an idle man could possibly find.

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50. The satisfaction of killing time and of affording some outlet, however modest, for ambition, belongs to most work, and is sufficient to make even a man whose work is dull happier on the average than a man who has no work at all. But when work is interesting, it is capable of giving satisfaction of a far higher order than mere relief from tedium. The kinds of work in which there is some interest may be arranged in a hierarchy. I shall begin with those which are only mildly interesting and end with those that are worthy to absorb the whole energies of a great man.

46. Accordingly more intelligent rich men work nearly as hard as if they were poor, while rich women mostly keep themselves busy with innumerable trifles of whose earth- shaking importance they are firmly persuaded.