在下面横线处填入适当的语句，使语段组成前后呼应、衔接紧密的排比句。（6分）
爱心是一片照射在冬日的阳光，使贫病交加的人感到人间的温暖；爱心是一泓出现在沙漠的泉水， ；爱心是一首飘荡在夜空的歌谣， 。
使濒临绝境的人重新看到生活的希望；使孤苦无依的人获得心灵的慰藉。（每句话句式一致1分，内容合理2分。）
题目分析：这是句子的仿写题，仿写时要注意上下文内容与情景的一致。“沙漠的泉水”对旅途艰辛、陷入绝境的人至关重要；“飘荡在夜空的歌谣”使人联想到空荡、冷落，进而联想到在这种境况下的需要爱心的人。
点评：句子的仿写是对学生语文综合能力的考查。句子的仿写做到形似相对来说较为容易，只要把握例句或上下句的句式特点、吃透题目的显性和隐性条件就能做到这一点。但仿写的最高境界就是神似，因此，仿写时不仅要把握句子的形式，更要把握句子间的逻辑形式。
When I was fifteen, I announced to my English class that I was going to write my own books. Half the students smiled unkindly, 36 nearly fell out of their chairs laughing. “Don’t be 37 , only geniuses can become writers,” the English teacher said, “And you are getting a D this term.” I was so ashamed I burst into 38 . That night I wrote a short sad poem about broken dreams and mailed it to the newspaper. To my 39 , they published it and sent me two dollars. I was a published and paid writer. I showed my teacher and fellow students. They laughed, “Just plain dumb luck,” the teacher said. I 40 success. I’d sold the first thing I’d 41 written. That was more than any of them had done and if it was just dumb luck that was fine with me. During the next two years I sold dozens of poems and letters. By the time I graduated from high school, I had scrapbooks (剪贴簿) 42 my published works. I never 43 my writing to my teachers, friends or my family 44 because they were dream killers. I had four children at the time. 45 the children slept, I typed on my ancient typewriter. I wrote what I felt. It took nine months. I chose a 46 and mailed it. A month later I received a contract, an advance on payments, and a request to start 47 another book. Crying Wind, became a best seller, was translated into fifteen languages and sold worldwide. My first book also became 48 reading in native American schools in Canada. The 49 year I ever had as a writer I earned two dollars. In my best year I earned 36,000 dollars. People ask what college I 50 , what degrees I had and what qualifications I have to be a writer. The answer is: “None.” I just write. I’m not a genius. I use an electric typewriter that I paid a hundred and twenty nine dollars 51 six years ago. I do all the housework and 52 my writing in a few minutes here and there. I’ve written eight books. To all those who dream of writing, I’m shouting at you: “Yes, you can. Don’t listen to them.” I don’t write right 53 I’ve succeeded. Writing is 54 , it’s fun and anyone can do it. 55 , a little dumb luck doesn’t hurt.
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