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I have just got some good news to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last
week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I went to England for a holiday. I'd like to
staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well.
We've been often writing to each for a year and a half now. I have often dreamed of talk face
to face with you. I imagine you'll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps we could
go out to do some sightseeing together.
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I have just got some good news to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last
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week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I went to England for a holiday. I'd like to
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staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well.
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We've been often writing to each∧for a year and a half now. I have often dreamed of talk face
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to face with you. I imagine you'll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps we could
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go out to do some sightseeing together.