问题 写作题

根据要求作文。

告别了懵懂青涩的少年时代,高中生正张开双臂拥抱五色斑斓的青春。一路走来,是谁在用心呵护照顾你,用理解的目光默默地注视你?又是什么时候在感动和激励着你,抑或常常困扰迷惑着你……

请以“一路有你”为题写一篇不少于700字的记叙文。

答案

题目分析:这是一道命题作文题,审题时要把握住关键词“你”“一路”。

从作文提供的材料看,“你”可以是实指,如亲人、师友,也可以是虚指,如知识、憧憬,不管是实指还是虚指都不应该局限于所给材料,学生完全可以而且应该加以拓宽。

因为是“有你”,所以写作中就必须考虑采用第二人称。一定要防止写成第三人称,变成“一路有她”,不能在有意无意中偷换概念;或用“妈妈”、“知识”等特定的称谓来代替,通篇都没有与题目相照应,那只能算是走题了。

另外,一篇文章中,“你”的内涵的指向性最好要单一,不要过于分散,如一会儿指母亲,一会儿指父亲,一会儿指老师,由“你”变成了“你们”。

“一路”,突出了时间的跨度,写作中要突出“你”在“我”的生命历程中所产生的持久而深入的影响。

从题目看,要求写记叙文或散文。据此,文章要出彩,必须要有精彩的描写,动作的,语言的,心理的,环境的,细节的。

点评:本题命题很符合高一学生的写作实际。首先从情感上看,高一学生到了一个新的成长阶段,自立性又强了一些,脱离父母掌控的欲望又更强烈了。这时我们该以文章的形式来提醒他们。其次从写作上,高一新生应该以记叙文为主要训练点,所以本题规定写记叙文是很符合学情的。

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Color use in nature
Nature is very colorful, full of different hues(色调)that delight the eye. What makes these colors and why do they exist?
Causes of Colors in Nature
Colors in nature are formed in two ways. Pigments, like the melanin in skin and many animal furs, produce most blacks, browns, reds and yellows. Most plants are green due to chlorophyll(叶绿素). Other colors are caused by structure, like many greens, blues, and whites. Blue bird’s feathers actually contain black pigment, but their structure causes them to appear blue. The scattering of light by tiny dust particles in the air, viewed against the black background of space, makes the sky look blue too.
Color Use in Plants
Color has a great effect on the survival of plants and animals. Flowers have bright hues and patterns to attract insects. These insects move from one flower to another, making sure seeds are produced. Bees can see colors we cannot, i.e. ultraviolet, and follow these patterns of stripes or dots to the inside of the flower.  
Not only flowers but also fruits use color for the good of the plant. An unripe fruit mixes in with the leaves, but ripe berries contrast, becoming more appealing to the creatures who eat them. Birds are especially drawn to red fruit, and in turn help the plant by broadcasting its seeds.
Camouflage(伪装)in Nature
Many colors and patterns camouflage animals who want to avoid enemies. Some animals have damaging shapes to break up their outline, so an enemy will not recognize them. The eye, a very recognizable animal characteristic, is often disguised by a black stripe or patch. Light color below makes up for the shadow on the underside of many fish, amphibians and mammals.
Some animals even change colors to better camouflage themselves, seasonally like the snowshoe hare.
Warning Coloration and Mimicry(动态伪装)
Warning colors make an animal more visible rather than hidden. These usually indicate a negative aspect of the animal, like the bad taste of a monarch butterfly, smelly smell or painful bite of a bee. Usually black and a contrasting color (white, yellow, orange or red) form a striking pattern in these creatures, and frighten their enemies away. Nature is tricky, though, and sometimes harmless creatures pretend the patterns of harmful ones to scare off animals living on meat too.  
Social Coloration in Nature
Sometimes coloration is important socially. Male birds, typically more colorful, defend their territories and attract females. Eggs may use color and pattern to remain hidden. When they hatch, parents feed the nestlings when they see the bright pattern in their gaping mouths.
Taking a closer look at nature throws light on how color is used in marvelous ways!
Color use in nature
___小题1:____ for colors in nature
Many colors are caused by 小题2: which produce most blacks, browns, reds and yellows.
Other colors exist due to  小题3: , like blue bird’s feathers, which appear blue but actually contain black pigment.
Color use in Plants
Flowers have bright hues and patterns to attract insects, and then insects’ moving from one flower to another makes seeds    小题4:    .
Fruits use colors, ripe color for example, to protect and help  小题5:  .
Color use in animals
Colors help many animals    小题6:  their killers. For example, damaging shapes can break up their outline, so an enemy will not recognize them.
Some animals, like snowshoe hares, 小题7: change colors to camouflage them.
Using warning colors to make themselves more小题8:  , thus frightening their enemies away.
Harmless creatures     小题9:     to be those harmful ones to scare off their enemies.
Social use in nature
Animals use colors to defend their territories and attract the     小题10:   sex.
 
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