问题 写作题

阅读下面的文字,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的议论文。

大千世界总有一些不起眼的地方。人们往往不去注意,不去关心,甚至会忽视,但是这些不起眼的地方,往往会出人意料地发出明媚的光芒,绽放人生的精彩,让人们彻底改变对这些地方的看法。

请根据读后的感悟和联想,写一篇不少于800字的文章。

要求:①自定立意;②自拟标题;③文体特征鲜明:议论文。

答案

题目分析:审材料

 材料可以分成三个层面的意思,第一个层面是“不起眼”。所谓不起眼,是指那些不受人们关心、不被人们注意,常常被人们忽略的人、事、物。第二个层面是“发出明媚的光芒”“绽放人生的精彩”。一般可以理解为获得了成功,取得了成绩,产生了影响。第三个层面是“改变了看法”。第二个层面与第一个层面之间用“但”来连接,从形式上看是一种转折关系,第三个层面是一、二两个层面发展的必然结果。第一个层面的“不起眼”与第二个层面的“焕发出明媚的光芒”“绽放人生的精彩”之间又产生了一种关系,一些“不起眼”的地方,由于某种转化,却“绽放了人生的精彩”,对这种关系的把握是审题的关键。

 不起眼的地方可以是细节,但一味地写细节或者细节决定成败也不一定切合题意,细节也有受人关注的和不受人关注的之分,在这里必须是由于关注那些不被人关注的细节,结果出人意料地“发出了明媚的光芒”,才被视为切合题意。也可以写平凡,写平凡不一定都切合题意,必须写由于对平凡的坚守或者其他,才绽放出了人生的精彩。再具体一点,像陈景润,居于六平米的斗室,却摘取了数学王冠上的明珠,那是源于他对数学探索的执著追求;像旭日阳刚,从默默无闻到一夜成名,那是源于他对音乐的一种发自内心的热爱。

 审要求     

 本题要求根据读后的感悟和联想,写一篇文章,这是一道材料作文题,不宜把它写成话题作文。应该认真研读材料,弄清材料中所包蕴的某种关系,从而确定一个比较好的立意角度,才能写好这篇文章。其他要求,基本上都是常规要求,最重要的一点还是文体特征鲜明这一点,从阅卷情况来看,文体特征鲜明仍然是今后写作教学需要关注的重点之一。

比较切合题意的角度:1、成功常见于忽微2、小处彰显人性之美3、蛰伏,等待光芒4、关注盲点5、寂寞•奋斗•成功6、伟大从小处诞生7、于无声处听惊雷8、把平凡做到极致9、非凡起于平凡10、一滴水也能折射出太阳的光辉11、别拿豆包不当干粮

点评:本次作文是一道材料作文,主要是针对当前中学生不太重视审题、审读材料粗枝大叶等现象,结合当前社会中对一些平凡、普通、细小的事物不太注意,关注程度不够等社会现象,设计了这样一道题目。目的在于引导学生去关注一些不起眼的地方,去关心、留意一些不起眼的事物,于平凡中彰显伟大,让细节成就未来,让普通变得卓越。意图在于引导学生去关注普通的的地方,生活中的一些地位、身份非常弱势的普通群体,这些人经过奋斗,也会焕发出光芒,创造自己成功的人生。比如现实中的农民工,不被人们关注,甚至受人歧视,恰恰是这些人,装点了城市,创造了生活的美好。学会关注这些,也是未来建设者应该具备的素质,就像最近发生的一些事,“民生”问题,以前关注较少,现在成了这次人代会讨论的重点;再比如最近炒得比较热的食品安全问题,看起来都是一些小事,但却是关乎到每一个人的大事;对于自身发展也有上些常常被忽略的细节、小事。这些都有必要引导学生去认识、去关注。

阅读理解

For nearly 100 years, the heartbroken Little Mermaid has sat on a rock looking out over Copenhagen's port but now the sculpture ,based on the famous fairytale, is heading back out to sea, set for China.

The small bronze statue inspired by the tale of author Hans Christian Andersen and unveiled in 1913, is a major tourist attraction in Copenhagen. But her life has not always been easy. She has been beheaded twice, had her arm cut off, was blown off her rock in 2003 and was dressed in a Muslim headscarf two years ago in a protest - but she never left her native country.

This week she was lifted from the harbor, boxed, and shipped to Shanghai where she is the star guest in the Danish Pavilion at EXPO 2010 which runs until October 31. Details over her trip were not revealed due to security issues.

"The Little Mermaid," published in 1837, is a sad story about a mermaid who falls in love with a prince and gives up her life in the sea and her tail for legs.

The fairytale has been adapted many times into stage shows and into a Disney movie.

Copenhagen mayor Frank Jensen said in a statement that the loan of The Little Mermaid was part of a cultural exchange between Denmark and China. "I am convinced that she will be an excellent ambassador of Denmark, particularly since the Chinese already are very fond of Hans Christian Andersen and his fairytales," he said in a statement.

Her departure from Copenhagen will not leave the harbor empty. Chinese artist Ai Weiwei has created a video installation(设备/装置)to be installed at her spot.

The Little Mermaid's 165 cm (65 inches) tall sculpture, which sits on a granite block, was created in 1913 by Edvard Eriksen.

小题1:The following statements are true EXCEPT________________.

A.the statue of The Little Mermaid will be given to China as a gift

B.the statue of The Little Mermaid is a major tourist attraction in Copenhagen

C.The Little Mermaid is a famous fairytale written by Hans Christian Andersen

D.the story of The Little Mermaid was once adapted into a Disney movie小题2:The underlined word “departure” here means_______________.

A.escaping

B.retiring

C.arriving

D.leaving小题3:From the passage, we can infer that ________________.

A.Chinese artist Ai Weiwei has created another Little Mermaid instead

B.the Danish people don’t like the statue of The Little Mermaid

C.the statue of The Little Mermaid will return to Denmark in the future

D.Edvard Eriksen wrote the story of the Little Mermaid

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