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  某厂家附在产品包装袋里的“回函卡”正文中有一段文字,存在不够得体、成分赘余、语序不当等语病,请改正其中四处。

  ①亲爱的顾客,谢谢您的光临。②本厂产品刚刚面市,为了更好地服务于顾客,请将您对本厂产品提出宝贵意见,并寄回本厂,③我们将惠赠薄礼,④请海涵。⑤以便我们改进。

① 改为:____________________________________

③ 改为:____________________________________

② 改为:____________________________________

④ 改为:____________________________________

⑤ ⑤句调整到_____________句前面。

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改正后的原文:

 亲爱的顾客,感谢您使用本厂产品。本厂产品刚刚面市,为了更好地服务于顾客,请(将)您对本厂产品提出宝贵意见,并寄回本厂,以便我们改进。我们将回赠薄礼,请笑纳(或:以示感谢)。

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Until a century ago, bloodletting was used to treat many ailments. Dating back to before the time of Christ, the treatment involved letting a type of worm, called a leech, such blood from the patient. People believed that there were liquids called humors in the body and that these determined a person’s personality and heath. Bloodletting, they thought, restored a balance to these humors.

At the time, little was known of the working of the human body, but people did know that the same liquid, blood, flowed throughout everyone’s body. They knew it was a vital substance, for loss of any great amount of it meant certain death. Thus, they concluded that all diseases were carried in the bloodstream, and that if the body was relieved of bad blood, heath would return. Bloodletting, however, came to be used as a cure-all. Woman were bled to keep them from blushing while members of the clergy were bled to prevent them from thinking sinful and worldly thoughts.

From the 11th to the 18th centuries, barbers were the people to go to if you needed to be bled. This custom explains the significance of the traditional barber’s pole: the white stripes stand for bandages and the red stripe for blood.

1. This passage is concerned about            .

healthy people and doctors                         B. bleeding as a cure-all

C. barbers of long ago                                      D. leeches with special jobs to do

2. The red and white stripes on barber pole symbolize         .

sin and redemption                             B. the bleeding form

C. women who are nurses                                  D. humors in the body

3. Why is bloodletting no longer considered a cure-all?

Because more is known about the workings of the human body.

Because leeches were outlawed

Because barbers were too busy cutting hair.

Because today we know that blood is necessary for health

4. In the second paragraph, the word “Thus” could be replaced by the word       .

A. When                        B. However                  C. If                            D. So

5. Ailments means           .

A. cures                         B. women                     C. disease                     D. medicines