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  大学自主招生面试时有一分钟的自我介绍时间,下面是某同学的陈述,其中有些内容游离中心,有些措辞不当,请加以修改。

老师,您好!

  ①敝人叫王龙,今年18岁,是××中学的高三毕业生。②我身高1米8,身体健康。③我很喜欢看书,也喜欢滑冰,弹琴等一些娱乐性活动,④在文学、体育、艺术等方面多有建树。⑤我坚强乐观,从不怕困难,有一种不迭目的不罢休的精神。⑥我最大的优点就是善解人意,我会在朋友最无助、最伤心时悄悄送去关怀。⑦某某大学,学术氛围浓厚,是我一直向往的名校。⑧我的家乡在古都西安,那里有闻名世界的兵马俑,有美丽的骊山、现代与历史交融的大雁塔等,欢迎老师有时间去做客。⑨希望贵校能慧眼识金,我将倍加珍惜。谢谢!

(1)必须删除的句子:______________

(2)需要修改的句子:将_________(填序号)改为_______________

           将_________(填序号)改为_______________

答案

必须删除的句子:③⑧

需要修改的句子:将④改为“我叫王龙,今年18岁,是××中学的高三毕业生。”

       将④改为“在文学、体育、艺术等方面均有突出表现。”

       将⑨改为“希望贵校给我一次机会,我将倍加珍惜。”

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第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.

Growing up to Be Independent

Growing up is not always easy. When facing difficulties, courage and a spirit of independence can be morn useful than crying for help. That's what Hong Zhanhui's story of growing from boy to man with family hardships tells us.

Hong who was born 1982 in a poor family in Xinhua County, Henan Province is now a hero in people's mind. When he was only 11, his father became mentally ill and one day came back with an abandoned baby girl. A year later, Hong's mother and younger brother both left home because of poverty and pressure from his sick father. Their burdens fell onto the 12-year-old's shoulders: to treat his father's illness, bring up the adopted sister Chenchen, and to go on to study.Hong didn't give up. Since a young age, he has worked in part-time jobs to feed his family. At the same time, he has studied at college. To take care of Chenchen, he worked hard to rent a room

near his campus for her, and send her to school. After Hong's story went public, people were moved to tears by his unselfishness. Hard as his life sas, Hong didn't abandon his father and the adopted sister, because they needed his help. With his hard-won money, he even aided other students struggling against misfortunes.

Hong's story shows that with love and willpower, no hardship can defeat a person but himself.So when facing difficulties, don't complain about bad luck. Consider what morn you could do for your family and society and you'll find the world smiling back.

假设你是一名读者,你读到了以上关于洪战辉的报道后,你想写信与他交朋友,在鼓励他的同时和他分享你自己的成长经历。

在信的开头介绍你读到的关于他的报道,以约30年词概括以上文章的内容要点。

以约120个词就“成长和独立”为主题,写一篇感想。并包括以下要点。

1.你读完这篇报道后有什么感想?你认为独立精神对青少年成长的作用是什么?

2.请记叙在你自己成长过程中就独立精神的培养的真实或虚构的一次经历.

写作要求

1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。