短文改错。
短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking
to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing
anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the
water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else in need.
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Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a
1. usually-usual
lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to
2. while-when 3. hear-heard 4. shocking-shocked
find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing
5. peoples-people
anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the
6. 去掉 had 7. but-and
water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
8. his- my
I was proud ∧ what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else ∧ in need.
9. of 10. is