改错题。
I am always interesting in traveling. My reasons are quite simple and clearly. If
anybody is not satisfied with my opinion, I'll greatly surprised at his ways of thinking.
First of all, traveling increased our knowledge.Only by traveling can we see thing
outside our hometown. In the second place, traveling is good to our health.While we
are traveling, we can breath in fresh air, taking exercises and strengthen our bodies as
well. In a word, I sincerely hope everybody that can catch the chance of traveling and
have good luck.
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I am always interesting in traveling. My reasons are quite simple and clearly. If
1. Interested 2. clear
anybody is not satisfied with my opinion, I'll ∧greatly surprised at his ways of
3. be or feel
thinking. First of all, traveling increased our knowledge.Only by traveling can we see
4. increases
thing outside our hometown. In the second place, traveling is good to our health. While
5. things 6. for
we are traveling, we can breath in fresh air, taking exercises and strengthen our bodies
7. breathe 8. take
as well as. In a word, I sincerely hope everybody that can catch the chance of traveling
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and have good luck.