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I am so exciting that I can’t wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first lesson
in our school, which left me the deep impression.
When I entered into the classroom, my students began to make much noise. I stood on the platform,
knowing what to do at first. But soon I realized everything must be done. I asked the kids that they liked
English songs. They all say “Yes.” I sang a song I had practiced many times. To my great surprise, all the
kids turned their attentions to my class.
From this experience I know however happens, we must stay calmly at first and find a wise solution.
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I am so exciting that I can't wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my
1. excited
first lesson in our school, which left me the deep impression.
2. a
When I entered into the classroom, my students began to make much noise. I stood on
3. 去掉
the platform,∧ knowing what to do at first. But soon I realized everything must be done. I
4. not 5. something
asked the kids that they liked English songs. They all say "Yes." I sang a song I had practiced
6. whether/if 7. said
many times. To my great surprise, all the kids turned their attentions to my class.
8.attention
From this experience I know however happens, we must stay calmly at first and find a wise
9. whatever 10. calm
solution.
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