问题 口语交际,情景问答题

请找出下列语段中划线处的语病并给予修改。(4分)

“西湖美景三月天哎,春雨如酒柳如烟哎”,①这首再熟悉不过的歌的前两句表现出西湖的美丽景色。这份美景在传承了上千年后终于得到了法定保护。西湖在2011年6月,②在巴黎召开的第35届世界遗产大会列入《世界遗产名录》。成功申遗的西湖是中国第41处“世界遗产”。

③西湖申遗的目的是为了保护西湖,造福后代。保护西湖始终是西湖发展的永恒主题。在人类生存的家园不断被破坏的时候,西湖申遗的成功可以有效地阻止环境的继续恶化,④美化并保护人类的生活环境和精神家园。

答案

①搭配不当,“表现”改为“描绘”。

②介词、副词缺失,“大会”后加“上被”。

③句式杂糅,“目的是”或“是为了”

④不合逻辑,应该为“保护并美化”。

题目分析:①景色不能表现出来,只能描绘出来;②该句所要表达的意思是西湖被列入《世界遗产名录》,但由于表述不清,成了世界遗产大会列入《世界遗产名录》,因此应该在“大会”后加“上被”。③ “目的是”和 “是为了”都是一个意思,去掉其中一个。④先保护好了才能美化,所以应该为“保护并美化”。

点评:修改病句,是辨析病句的最终目的。病句修改题考点要求包含以下几个方面: 1.辨析并判断句子的正误。2.从成分残缺、搭配不当、语序不当、结构混乱等方面有侧重地修改病句。3.用符号修改有语病的句子。4.在语段中找出病句进行修改。修改病句以通顺、正确为原则,不作修饰,不改变原意。把握句子结构,了解常见病句类型及修改方法,是基本应对策略。要特别注意成分残缺、搭配不当、语序不对、结构混乱等语病。

单项选择题

The telecommunications, pharmaceutical, and airline industries all have undergone radical changes in recent years. Pharmaceutical companies, which once sold drugs to the doctors that dispensed them, switched to the solution-selling method and started dealing with health-care companies. And many major airlines consolidated at the same time that low-cost firms like Jet Blue entered the market.

In each of these industries, the game changed, and with new rules came new ways to win. That is the premise of Harvard Business School’s "Changing the Game. Negotiation and Competitive Decision Making." The program, which covers not only deal-making but also topics as diverse as online auctions and strategic partnerships, "is for companies that are going through fundamental change in the way things are done," says Max Bazerman, program chair and professor of business administration at the school.

This is not a program for novices, says Bazerman; most participants have already attended a general negotiation program. In "Changing the Game," participants learn to understand their thought processes regarding negotiation, to compare rational and intuitive decision-making strategies, and to identify common mistakes made by even the most experienced professionals. By focusing on competitive environments, the program draws on some of the most advanced concepts from the emerging areas of behavioral economics, behavioral decision research, and behavioral finance.

Participants engage in simulated negotiations that highlight the tension between creating and assessing value, and learn how to think about both simultaneously. The soup-to-nuts simulations encompass preparation, team building, negotiating, and feedback, as well as the development of a conceptual structure for thinking about negotiations more rationally. Participants then apply that structure in their critiques of several large-scale negotiation cases. Ultimately participants apply their newly-honed analytic skills to their own companies and critique of past negotiations.

Negotiations can take many forms, of course. Bazerman notes that auctions are becoming increasingly common. Thanks to a renewed focus on driving clown costs, auctions have emerged as a valuable way for buyers to exert maximum leverage (although the course offers advice to sellers as well). Here again, coursework focuses both on analysis of case studies and on simulations that give participants a chance to roll up their sleeves and put themselves to the test.

"Max’s approach is more pragmatic than other programs I’ve taken," says Gerry Dully, senior vice president of global marketing and logistics at Methanex, a producer of methanol based in Vancouver. "Looking at my prior experience, I could see what mistakes I made, and I’m more conscious of them now. The course had a profound impact on how I’ve modified my behavior in negotiating situations.

The author cites the pharmaceutical industry to show that()

A. such an industry should be brought under stricter supervision

B. the solution-selling method is superior to the traditional method

C. it is not developing as fast as the airline industry

D. new ways of transaction accompany changes in the industry

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