Dear editor,

Recently our school has carried out a survey--to whom do you go when in trouble? The results are as follows:

61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble. The

reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. 22% choose

teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences.

However, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of other’s

business and some of them find it hard to get along with others.

As for me, I prefer to deal with my troubles by myself first. When I am faced with troubles, seeking for various

ways to settle is my first step. Because sometimes troubles are not so troublesome or challenging as we expected,

they can be solved entirely with my efforts. I do like to experience the pleasure. Of course, sometimes I will also

turn to my parents or friends for help if the troubles are not within my ability.

Yours

Lihua  

题目分析：题目要求就一项调查活动的结果向校报编辑写一封信。写作要点以饼图的形式呈现，选择向同学、朋友说的占大多数，其次是向老师、父母说，少数选择不向别人说。作文可以分为两部分，一部分描述调查的结果；第二部分叙述自己的观点。写作时注意前后文的衔接，对调查结果的描述尽量客观。

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