问题 写作题

请根据以下图表和要点提示,写一篇英语短文。

1.参考词汇:国家公务员考试the test for national civil servants

2.词数:150词左右

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答案

In the past three years, there has been an obvious increase in the number of college graduates who take the test for national civil servants. Compared with the figure of 2011 and 2012, it rose to 76.5% in 2013. That is to say, choosing to take the test for national civil servants has turned into a fever.

Many college graduates hold the opinion that if they succeed in passing the test, they will achieve their great aim of obtaining a steady/ stable job forever and they will live with comfort and relaxation, for being a civil servant is their most ideal occupation with few risks; meanwhile, it will bring them high salary.

Many experts think too many graduates make this choice, which results in too fierce competition. What’s more, college graduates should make proper choices when seeking for jobs which they are really interested in and suitable for.

From where I stand, we are supposed to look for jobs according to our own personality and interests. After all only by taking up jobs that they are interested in, one can make greater achievements in the future.

题目分析:这是一篇图表类作文。请根据图表和要点提示,写一篇英语短文。首先要看懂图表内容,需要写的内容已经粗略给出,需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子,适当添加些内容,使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数150词左右,不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】In the past three years, there has been an obvious increase in the number of college graduates who take the test for national civil servants.这里含有一个定语从句;Many experts think too many graduates make this choice, which results in too fierce competition.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。What’s more, college graduates should make proper choices when seeking for jobs which they are really interested in and suitable for.这里含有一个定语从句。

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[A] International students have the same needs as local students and should be accorded equivalent rights and protections—except in a few areas, such as voting in national elections. A more comprehensive and rights-based approach to the security of international students could be obtained through bilateral negotiations between the countries that send and receive them. China, India, Malaysia, and other nations should seek a systematic regime of protection and respect for their citizens who study in other countries. As a pattern of bilateral negotiations became established, common global standards could emerge.

[B] What did we find The experience of international students differs from that of local students in three ways. First, the lives of international students are more marginal, lonelier, and less informed than those of their local peers. Second, the majority of international students in Australia face at least some barriers to communicating in English that affect not just academic progress but also daily life. Problems of abuse or discrimination are often associated with communications issues. Third, there are pronounced differences between local and international students in areas where cultural identity are at play, not just in cross-cultural relations but in looking for rental housing, seeking a job, and so on.

[C] National and state governments should also subsidize affordable housing, for a mix of international and local students, in areas where students study and work. The governments should also require inspections of students’ rental housing. They should provide supervised transport, especially at night. The police should patrol hot spots where violence is occurring or might occur. International students should receive adequate information about safety and security upon arrival in their new countries.

[D] We defined student security as including the full range of issues affecting the empowerment and protection of international students: financial support, housing, health, safety, work issues, and relations with their universities and the government’s immigration department. We also looked into international students’ personal networks, communications, and intercultural issues. We conducted the empirical work for our study in Australia, but our research and that of other scholars show that the underlying issues are common, to some extent, to all countries.

[E] The fundamental problem, however, lies with nations’ regulatory frameworks, which should be modified for a globalized world. We must find ways of moving international- student security up the policy agenda of national governments, multilateral forums, and global agencies. Australian international education, for example, is now regulated through the Education Services for Overseas Students Act. It imposes obligations on provider institutions, mostly in relation to consumer protection and immigration compliance. But safety on campus is not mentioned. The act does not cover students’ lives in the community outside the campus, where most problems of security occur.

[F] But delve deeper and you will find that although most students succeed abroad and have satisfying experiences, certainly not all of them do—and some have major problems, which can range far beyond loneliness and difficulties adjusting to new cultures. Some international students are victims of terrible crimes. Unfortunately, their security is not adequately ensured by the countries where they study, which still treat them as outsiders and their rights as privileges that can be ignored. Even though global mobility in education has rendered such an approach obsolete, national regulations have not kept pace.

[G] What should be done to improve the safety and security of international students For them, security means not only protection but also the capacity to operate as free human agents making choices. For many international students, acquiring communication skills is almost as important as acquiring degrees. Universities in English-speaking countries should make English-language communication a formal requirement for degree status.

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