Dear Bob,

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one that I think is pretty good. It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

It's a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

I’m expecting your coming.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

题目分析：这篇文章是图画类写作，要求写信介绍住房的情况，包括住房内部的结构和外面的设施，要求认真审图，将图介绍清楚，同时介绍细节，注意方位的表达，也要按照文体和篇章要求组织语篇。 4. 润色，注意措辞、复杂句式及承上启下的自然衔接，校对细节。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了好的词组和句子： All the best!万事如意， It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.这句话用了定语从句，It's a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.这句话用了复合结构， If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. 这句话用了省略句。